RabbitFox's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Simple Fighting v.1]

I'll give you a half a star for effort as the controls kind of work though they feel stiff. But, honestly, at this point, it just isn't actually a game because it's unfinished. I'm not trying to be harsh, but I don't think that this is something that was ready to be published because of this reason.

I realize that you know that the enemy can't fight back and that you might have some graphical issues but, those are both big issues almost like "Big Rigs: Over the Road Racing" faced.

A lack of variety of choices of characters and locations with no music and only a bare few sound effects I don't think helps it either. I'm not trying to dash your hopes but, I would work on things like this on your own and consult with friends and have them play test it and try and work on it until its complete before publishing it.

surya91 responds:

thanks for your opinion rabbit. its true what u said. well i'm trying hardto draw defending on my skill is bad about graphic. and also i'm still search an script which can make the enemy move and hit the player. and i will update this game until it complete. your opinion is my learning to make a complete game. thanks a lot

ups. i forgot something. in the book it teach me how to make 2 player . that's why i must find an enemy script. but dont worry. the graphic is not same in the book. and this graphic is made by myself from drawing.

[Simple Love]

I generally liked the overall concept of this, the music and art style were fitting. The controls worked well for the game, too. I was sometimes a little lost for where to go but, I don't think that there was too much of an issue of finding anything in the game. The only thing that I would look over would be any grammar mistakes or typos that you might have. However, I don't think that this is an enormous issue, and overall I think that it was nice to play.

amidos2006 responds:

Sorry for the typos and mistakes I am not a native english speaker beside I made in around 12 hours :) so I had to be quick :)